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PostSubject: the ghost(i'll post the other chapters when i'm done with the chapter)   Tue Aug 25, 2009 6:46 pm

**********CHAPTER 1:GHOST APPEARS**********
jack:come on,we cant let evil come again,
crow:but we cant do anything right now,
ray:what are you two talkin about,
yusei:i'll tell you,a year ago,the dark signers were beaten,but halve a year after that when the Daedalus Bridge was completed,people went missing,but there D-wheelers were still in traffic,it's highly likely that the person behind this is a D-wheeler,lately the Daedalus Bridge has been the area of the disappearances,kiryu and bommer have just disappeared without a trace,
ray:whoa,then whats going to happen to the Daedalus Bridge?
jack:they're have to tear it down,
ray:after all that work,
crow:yes,it'll take a year and a halve to rebuild it,
jack:and we cant finish it while defeating evil,,
ray:well okay,bye,
yusei:hold up,also speed world is forbidden in all duels,even ghosts duels,
*2 hours later*
ray:i never used this D-wheel for a turbo duel,but i've got to help yusei,
ghost:time for your defeat,
ray:i'll beat you at any cost,
ghost:you have the first turn,
ray:i draw,i summon speed warrior in atk mode,then play the spell double summon to summon junk synchron in atk mode,i tune my lv3 junk synchron with my lv 2 speed warrior,Clustering stars will call upon a new force! Become the path its light shines upon! Synchro Summon! Show yourself, Junk Warrior!,i place two cards face-down and end my turn,
ghost:i draw,i activate heavy storm,next i play monster reborn to special summon your speed warrior,then i play brain control to bring your junk warrior to my side of the field,next i attack with both junk warrior and speed warrior,
ray:nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnooooooooooooooooooooooo.(ray's LP:0)
*crashes*
*blacks out*
*disappears*
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PostSubject: Re: the ghost(i'll post the other chapters when i'm done with the chapter)   Tue Aug 25, 2009 6:50 pm

nice, another story. cant wait for more of this.
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PostSubject: Re: the ghost(i'll post the other chapters when i'm done with the chapter)   Tue Aug 25, 2009 6:52 pm

well that was short lol. but interesting non-the-less. (i dont know what that means. but i know its used in a situation like this lol)


i would just try to make it neater so its easier to read. but it still was intersting. i'll be waiting for the next chapters.
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PostSubject: Re: the ghost(i'll post the other chapters when i'm done with the chapter)   Tue Aug 25, 2009 6:52 pm

with what Ryan said, try and space out the lines so it will be easier to read, maybe even make the font a little bigger
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PostSubject: Re: the ghost(i'll post the other chapters when i'm done with the chapter)   Tue Aug 25, 2009 7:43 pm

**CHAPTER 2:the next day**

yusei:jack,crow,have you seen ray.
jack:no.
crow:why?
yusei:i went to his house and found this note.

note wrote:
yusei if you read this i have gone to take on ghost.i wont let the darkness come back.
~ray
jack:i may of found out where ghost is.
yusei:where?
jack:i saw kiryu the other day but he just went to the battlefield of that duel.
crow:the one against rex goodwin?
jack:yes.
yusei:i'm not letting the same thing happen again.
jack:i also heard that at 12:00 AM they will begin the destruction of the daedalus bridge.
crow:then let's hurry and find ghost.
?????:you'll have to get past us first.
yusei:who are you?
???????:it dosnt matter.meet us at the 2 battle field's of destiny.
yusei:who were they.and what did they meen by the 2 battlefield's of destiny?
jack:it could be where you faced kiryu and i faced carly.
crow:well lets go.
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PostSubject: Re: the ghost(i'll post the other chapters when i'm done with the chapter)   Tue Aug 25, 2009 8:06 pm

well it was easier to read. and the note thing is pretty fancy lol. still with the short chapters though but regardless, i like it. seems interesting.
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PostSubject: Re: the ghost(i'll post the other chapters when i'm done with the chapter)   Tue Aug 25, 2009 8:17 pm

woah, a little too big i think
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PostSubject: Re: the ghost(i'll post the other chapters when i'm done with the chapter)   Wed Aug 26, 2009 7:28 am

**CHAPTER 3:the three battlefield's of destiny**

yusei:okay here we go.
crow:i'll go to the last battlefield.
jack:then lets do this
**20 minutes later**
crow:who you?
???:oh crow dont you remember an old friend when you see them
crow:yes but....wait!!
ray:that's right.it's me ray
crow:what happened?
ray:i dueled ghost and he finished me off in one turn,from that point my only ally was him and darkness
crow:don't protect ghost.
**meanwhile**
yusei:who are you?
?????:you should remember me old friend.
yusei:no,is that you kiryu?
kiryu:that's right.
yusei:but i thought once we defeated rex...
kiryu:you thought wrong.
yusei:don't go back to darkness kiryu
**meanwhile**
jack:who are you
???????:you were never my friend.
jack:okay,so then who are you?
grieger:it's me grieger.
jack:well then let's duel.
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PostSubject: Re: the ghost(i'll post the other chapters when i'm done with the chapter)   Wed Aug 26, 2009 5:09 pm

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ok now thats funy
every story i make has at least 1 funny part.
**CHAPTER 4:crow vs ray**
crow:ray,stop this.
ray:you'll have to duel me then.
crow:okay,you have the first turn.
ray:i place 3 face-down's and play the field spell pandemonium end my turn.
crow:i summon blackwing - bora the spear in atk mode and place 2 card's face-down and end my turn.
ray:i summon jester lord in atk mode.it's atk is 4000.now i activate royal decree and atk with jester lord.i end my turn.
crow:i activate mystical space typhoon to destroy royal decree.
ray:now i activate the discord trap.
crow:i activate trap stun.now i summon blackwing - blizzard the north pole and specail summon blackwing - bora the spear.i tune my level 2 blackwing - blizzard the north pole with my level 4 blackwing - bora the spear to synchro summon blackwing armed wing.i attack jester lord with blackwing armed wing and end my turn.
ray:now the effect of trap stun where's off.i activate brain control.i attack with blackwing armed wing.
crow:i activate negate attack.
ray:i set a monster face-down and end my turn.
crow:i attack with blackwing armed wing.
ray:i activate mirror force.
crow:i set a monster face-down and end my turn.
ray:i summon double coston and activate double summon.i sacrifice double coston to summon earthbound immortal wiraqocha rasca.
crow:IMPOSSIBLE,we defeated it.
ray:i activate it's effect and turn your life point's to 1.i end my turn.
crow:listen ray why did you...
ray:i already told you.
crow:listen,dont you remember the note.
ray:but..
crow:ghost is just using you.
*ray faint's*
crow:man.if ray was this hard to beat.i just hope yusei and jack don't lose.
*time 11:00 PM*


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PostSubject: Re: the ghost(i'll post the other chapters when i'm done with the chapter)   Wed Aug 26, 2009 5:16 pm

not badd. but im confusedd. dont all Earthbound Immortal cards requiar a field spell to be active?
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PostSubject: Re: the ghost(i'll post the other chapters when i'm done with the chapter)   Thu Aug 27, 2009 9:34 pm

*CHAPTER 5:kiryu vs yusei**
yusei:kiryu,stop this.
kiryu:why should i?
yusei:you were are friend.
kiryu:ghost gave me more power than anyone could.
yusei:what?
kiryu:i have the deck of rex goodwin.
yusei:WHAT!!
kiryu:so let's duel.
yusei:what's your plan?
kiryu:once the bridge is destroyed we can take over the Satellite so we can cover new domino city in darkness.
yusei:i wont let that happen.
kiryu:then we duel.
yusei:you can have the first turn.
kiryu:no you have the first turn.
yusei:then i summon sonic chick in def mode and set 1 card face-down.i end my turn.
kiryu:i specail summon shinto priest of the sun and summon Red Ant Azcatl and i synchro summon sun dragon inti and next i specail summon Stone Statue of the Lamenting God and then i specail summon Dark Tuner - Black Goddess Witaka and activate it's effect and synchro summon Moonlight Dragon Quilla and set 1 card face-down and i end my turn.
yusei:i summon exiled force in atk mode and activate it's effect and destroy sun dragon inti.
kiryu:when he's destroyed.
yusei:save it i activate solemn judgement.
kiryu:did i mention.speed world is now legal.
yusei:i end my turn.
kiryu:i set 1 card face-down and end my turn.
yusei:i summon speed warrior in atk mode and attack.
kiryu:i activate Sacrifice of Honor.
yusei:i end my turn.
kiryu:i summon Earthbound Immortal Wiraqocha Rasca and activate it's effect.i activate dark hole.
yusei:i activate Starlight Road and specail summon Stardust Dragon.
kiryu:i end my turn.
yusei:wait.i also specail summon Stardust Xiaolong.
kiryu:i end my turn.
yusei:i summon Salvation Dragon - Savior Dragon and synchro summon savior star dragon and attack your earthbound immortal.
*kiryu faint's*
yusei:KIRYU!!!
crow:so i guess the duel was hard.
yusei:i just hope jack can defeat grieger..
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PostSubject: Re: the ghost(i'll post the other chapters when i'm done with the chapter)   Fri Aug 28, 2009 3:58 pm

not badd. but i dont think you can solemn the activation of a monsters effect. the only thing solemn can negate that belongs to a monster is its summoning i bleive.
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PostSubject: Re: the ghost(i'll post the other chapters when i'm done with the chapter)   Fri Aug 28, 2009 4:32 pm

Ryan wrote:
i dont think you can solemn the activation of a monsters effect. the only thing solemn can negate that belongs to a monster is its summoning i beleive.
correct.not to it's effect.
effect wrote:
When a "Sun Dragon Inti" on your field is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon this card from your Graveyard.
you can chain it to a specail summon :/
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PostSubject: Re: the ghost(i'll post the other chapters when i'm done with the chapter)   Sat Sep 05, 2009 7:50 pm

**CHAPTER 6:jack vs grieger**
jack:okay.let's duel.
grieger:i summon trap reactor and end my turn.
jack:i specail summon vice dragon in atk mode.now i summon Dark Resonator in atk mode and tune my lv 5 vice dragon with my lv 3 Dark Resonator (The ruler's heartbeats will now file through here! Take witness to its creation-shaking power! Synchro Summon! My very soul, Red Demons Dragon!).i attack with red dragon archfiend.i end my turn.
grieger:i activate monster reborn and specail summon trap reactor - Y FI in atk mode.i set 1 card face-down and summon spell reactor.i end my turn.
jack:i sacrifice red dragon archfiend to summon strong wind dragon(5400 atk) it atk mode.i atk your trap reactor.
grieger.i activate fake explosion and specail summon summon reactor - SK in atk mode.
jack:i end my turn with 2face-down's.
grieger:i specail summon Flying Fortress SKY FIRE and activate its effect.
jack:i activate Compulsory Evacuation Device.
grieger:i end my turn.
jack:i atk with strong wind dragon.
*grieger spins out*
*grieger disappears*
jack:i wonder if those 2 finished yet.
yusei:hey jack.
crow:how was the duel?
jack:easy.but we still have to defeat ghost.
crow:yeah.
yusei(shocked):guys its 11:51 PM.
crow:we have to hurry.
jack:he's on the other side of domino city.
crow:we can still make it.
jack:but crow..
crow:listen.the dark signers took my family.
yusei:we know.
crow:if we dont beat ghost then it wont be safe anymore.
jack:he does have the power to split domino city like last time.
yusei:lets go.


i add a pic of them riding there D-wheels.
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