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PostSubject: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Tue Aug 25, 2009 9:36 pm

FALLEN ANGELS CHAPTER ONE: THE ERUPTING VULCAN

We start this story with a duel that has already been started. After Mike, a young teenager in Twilight Duel Academy, bumps into a very easily-enraged Slifer Red, this leads to a duel which we will tune into now

Mike: Alright its my turn Mr. No-Name

Mike LP = 1000
No-Name LP =2000

Mike has no monsters or set magic/trap cards on his side of the field while No-Name has D.D. Survivor [4*1800/200] in attack mode


Mike: I draw, and what do you know just what i needed to end this duel, First i summon Blackwing - Sirocco the Dawn [5*2000/900] in attack mode.

BLACKWING-SIROCCO THE DAWN:If your opponent controls a monster and you control no monsters, you can Normal Summon or Set this card without Tributing.

Mike: then i activate lightning vortex by discarding one card i can destroy your DD Survivor!

*Mike discards Dark Armed Dragon and lightning comes down and destroys DD Survivor

Mike: Now sirocco end this duel!

Sirocco lunges at No-Name and he is defeated, holograms fade

Mike: Your very quiet for someone who just lost a duel

No-Name: My name is Gary

Gary: You better not bump into me again or things wont go so easily for you.

Gary walks away to his next class

Mike: Strange guy...and hes made me late to class Mr. Vulcan is gonna erupt!

Mike runs to his next class

Mr. Vulcan Glad you decided to join us Mike, what's your excuse this time?

Mike: Im sorry Mr. Vulcan i got caught up in a duel with some Slifer named Gary

Everyone laughs

Mr. Vulcan I'm sorry to disappoint you but there is no Slifer by the name of Gary to my knowledge

Mike: Well your knowledge is wrong...no offence....

Mr. Vulcan: Well lets see how our knowledges pair against each other, Mike get your duel disk out!

Mike: Alright!!

Both players get their duel disks out and the LP are set to 4000

Vulcan and Mike: Duel!

Vulcan: I'll start this off, now kids pay attention to see how a real duel goes on

Vulcan Draws

Vulcan: I summon Volcanic Rat [1*500/500] in attack mode! then ill throw down two face downs and end my turn

Mike: My turn, I draw...Perfect!...Alright kids lets show Mr. Vulcan here how to really play duel monsters! I activate Heavy storm

Vulcan: uh-oh

Sakuretsu armor and mirror force get destroyed

Mike: Now ill activate Black Whirlwind [When a "Blackwing" monster is Normal Summoned to your side of the Field, you can add 1 "Blackwing" monster from your Deck to your hand that has less ATK than that monster.]
Now i summon Blackwing Sirocco the dawn and thanks to black whirlwind i can add blackwing- gale the whirlwind [3*1300/400] to my hand which now i can special summon along with blackwing-bora the spear [4*1700/800]

BLACKWING-GALE: If you control a "Blackwing" monster other than "Blackwing - Gale the Whirlwind", you can Special Summon this card from your hand. Once per turn, you can halve the ATK and DEF of 1 face-up monster your opponent controls.

BORA THE SPEAR: If you control a "Blackwing" monster other than "Blackwing - Bora the Spear", you can Special Summon this card from your hand. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent.

Mike: Talk about pulling a Crow Hogan, now i activate siroccos effect which makes gale's total attack 5000

Vulcan: Enough of this you did a missplay you will stay in for school detention

Holograms fade, Vulcan leaves the room

Mike: Missplay? What did i do?

Bell rings everyone leaves except Mike
Vulcan comes in the room


Vulcan: Mikey, Mikey, Mikey what will i ever do with you?

TO BE CONTINUED


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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Tue Aug 25, 2009 10:53 pm

FALLEN ANGELS CHAPTER TWO: A CELESTIAL ENCOUNTER

Mike: Mr. Vulcan im positive i didnt make a misplay if i did it was an accident.. im sorry

Vulcan: Well Mike im going to make you clean this classroom anyhow so you might as well do it

Mike: No!

Vulcan: What?!?!

Mike: im not gonna do this..i didnt do anything wrong and you know it now if you'll excuse me i have a show to catch

Mike runs out to go home completely disregarding the teachers yelling for him to come back

Back at home...


Mike: Hey sis whats for dinner

SILENCE

Mike: sis?

SILENCE

Mike: Jaime!!

Mike runs out to see a screeching car and he gets a glimpse of his sister, Jaime, in the back seat all tied up

Mike: Oh no!

Mike gets his bike and tries to catch up to the car with his sister in it
it was a long limousine which only a very rich person could afford


Mike:(in thoughts) theres only one person in town with that much money....the head of twilight duel academy

The car finally loses Mike, Mike's bike trips and makes Mike fall to the ground. Mike is unconscious
When Mike finally wakes up he is laying on a soft cloud surrounded by Angels


Mike: Am..am i dead?

An angel with an hourglass steps up

Angel with hourglass: According to your Death Hourglass your time is not done yet, my name is Death, but you can call me Time.

Another angel steps up, this one looks amazing he has crow-like wings and armor like a knight

Angel: My name is Castiel
Castiel: Come with me and i will explain what is going on

Mike: I just wanna wake up from this dream and save my little sister shes in trouble!

Castiel: you will accomplish all that and more if you just come with me

Seeing as there's no other choice Mike goes with Castiel they walk a good distance away from the other angels and begin to talk

Mike: who were those angels back there?

Castiel: They, including myself, are angels who have been given one more chance to be reedemed, and well...actually why bore you with all this talk when we can duel

Mike: but arent you like some sort of spirit, how can you duel?

Castiel: let's find out shall we?

Mike: i never back down from a challenge so bring it on

All the other angels turn into cards and form a deck in the air on Castiels arm, as if he were wearing an invisible duel disk

LP are set to 4000


Mike: Lets do this! ill start off, i draw, alright i activare black whirlwind then i summon BW Bora the spear in attack mode, now whirlwind lets me retrieve a BW Gale the whirlwind from my deck then i can special summon that! Now i synchro summon....
BW Armor Master[7*2500/1500] in Attack mode, ill throw a face down and end my turn

Castiel: you are a strong duelist but you still have much to learn my turn! i draw, i activate the magic card Cost Down [Discard 1 card from your hand. Downgrade all Monster Cards in your hand by 2 Levels until the End Phase of the turn this card is activated.] by discarding
Black Dusk Angel

I can summon White Dawn Angel

and when that monster is summoned can get Black Dusk Angel to my hand which then can be special summoned, like you i am also synchro summoning i summon
Light and Darkness Angel


Once per turn you can change the attribute of this card to Dark, or to Light. Activate one of these effects based on the attribute.
-Light: Your opponents monsters cannot attack, be destroyed by battle, change positions, or be tributed.
-Dark: Your opponents monster are changed to attack position and must attack each turn.

I keep his attribute Dark, i throw down two cards then i attack, Light and Darkness Angel
dark smash! attack his armor master

L & D Angel Attacks Armor Master ... nothing happens

Mikes LP - 4000
Castiel LP - 4000

ARMOR MASTER: This card cannot be destroyed by battle, and you take no Battle Damage from battles involving this card. If this card attacks a monster, you can place 1 Wedge Counter on that monster at the end of the Damage Step (max. 1). You can remove all Wedge Counters from your opponent's monsters to reduce the ATK and DEF of each monster that had a Wedge Counter to 0, until the End Phase.

Mike: Nice try, but its my turn i Draw that was a nice move but it wont be a match for this I special summon BW bora the spear then i normal summon BW elphin the raven [6*2200/1200]

ELPHIN - If you control a face-up "Blackwing" monster, you can Normal Summon this card without Tributing. When this card is Normal Summoned , you can change the Battle Position of 1 monster your opponent controls.


Mike: Then i switch your light and darkness angel to --

Castiel: i activate bottomless trap hole on elphin the raven

Mike: Grr...no matter i still have to attack, Armor Master attack L & D Angel, as you already know i can leave a counter on him and when i remove it its attack changes to 0, so now i activate Armor Master' effect

Castiel: Wrong again, i activate Divine Wrath [Discard 1 card from your hand. Negate the activation of an Effect Monster's effect and destroy that Effect Monster.] I discard angel of death and your Armor Master is Destroyed

Mike: Then i end my--

Castiel: do you like being wrong all the time? L & D Angel's effect MAKES you attack which means your bora still attacks my Angel

Bora attacks the Angel, gets destroyed and Mike's LP drops to 2800

Mike: i end my turn by placing two cards face down

Castiel: i draw, now i activate giant trunade all cards go back to their owners hand, Light and Darkness Angel attack directly

Mikes LP dros to 0
holograms fade, Castiel stretches his hand to pick up Mike


Castiel: Come with me and i will tell you how to save your sister, and possible the world

TO BE CONTINUED
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Tue Aug 25, 2009 11:11 pm

nice story, interesting setting and different outcome than expected
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Tue Aug 25, 2009 11:28 pm

all i have to say is........

WOW!!!1 DUDE!!!! AWESOME!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Wed Aug 26, 2009 12:02 am

Thanks guys stay tune for 3, 4 and MAAAYBE 5 tomorrow
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Wed Aug 26, 2009 12:22 am

how dare you make us wait Razz lolz
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Wed Aug 26, 2009 8:40 am

Nice Very Happy
*wants more*
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Wed Aug 26, 2009 10:47 am

Castiel: do you like being wrong all the time?


i laughed at this part lol.



awesome story so far man. you may beat me lol. or maybe its just cause i've seen my fan fic longer than yours. and new stuff always excites me lol.
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Wed Aug 26, 2009 6:09 pm

FALLEN ANGELS CHAPTER 3: Angels vs Dinosaurs

After going with Castiel Mike learned that it wasnt the head of Twilight Duel Academy, but someone...something much MUCH more dangerous

Mike: Who..or What would want to take over the world, and what does my sister have to do with this?

Castiel: They call themselves "The Risen." We..and The Risen think that your sister might be one of the Fallen Angel, and if The Risen have a fallen angel they can use her light powers to gain control of the world

Mike: My sister?!! but..how what...she doesnt even have wings...

Castiel: ..you will understand as time passes for now i will accompany you wherever you go in a spirit form and you will put The Fallen Angel cards in your deck as an addition to your blackwing deck, you will save your sister, the world and us, now i return you to your home...try to get some sleep i will see you tomorrow

Mike: Wait! i still want to know more

A bright light flashes and consumes Mike
Now he is at his house


Mike: how can i sleep with my sister gone and i cant do anything about it...

Castiel: Very well then, Time, work your magic

Angel of Death Appears out of her card

and turns the Hourglass in her hand
it is now the next day at 7:50 AM time for school
Angel of Death goes back to her card


Mike: Awh crap im going to be late, and i bet Mr. Vulcan is still mad at me...probably a week's detention...

Mike goes to school without eating or changing clothes he gets there at 8:01 just a minute late

???: Alright whos up first?

Mike: Im sorry im late again Mr. Vulca--wait who are you?

???: I am Ms. Rax
Ms. Rax: Mr. Vulcan got fired last night

Castiel: (in Mike's ear) your welcome

Rax: just have a seat--wait since your late you'll be my first opponent, alright class lets pay attention to how we both try to use combos

Mike: Alright lets do this

Both players get their duel disks out and the LP are set to 4000


Rax: Alright ladies first so i draw

Castiel:(to Mike) not much of a lday if you ask me

Mike:(to Castiel) i thought you were supposed to be an angel

Castiel:(to mike) we have our own sets of faults, too

Rax: Alright stop mumbling to yourself over there and lets get started i special summon Gilasaurus [3*1400/400]

GILASAURUS: You can Special Summon this card from your hand. If you do this, your opponent can Special Summon 1 monster from their Graveyard.

and since you have no monsters in your grave theres no benefit for you, next i activate Big Evoution Pill [Tribute 1 Dinosaur-Type monster to activate this card. This card remains face-up on the field for 3 of your opponent's turns. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon or Set Dinosaur-Type monsters without Tributing.]
By tributing Gilasaurus i can summon without tribute, and since i special summoned Gilasaurus i can normal summon Super Conductor Tyranno [8*3300/1400] i'll set two cards face down and ill end my turn

Class is cheering

Mike: Nice combo but now its my turn and it wont end too lightly, i draw, no combos this time so ill throw down a monster activate
Flight Lessons

This card cannot be removed from the field by the opponents spell, trap, or monster effects. As long as this card is face up winged-beast monsters on your side of the field cannot be destroyed by battle. (Damage calculation applies normally) If you take battle damage from a battle including a winged-beast monster your opponent takes half the battle damage as you did. and ill end my turn

Rax: wont end too lightly right? well anyhow its my turn, i draw alright get ready for this, i Summon Black Tyranno [7*2600/1800] and now i get to attack your life points directly

BLACK TYRANNO: If your opponent controls no cards except Defense Position Monster Cards, this card can attack your opponent directly
Black Tyranno, attack directly!

Black Tyranno jumps over the face down monster and attacks Mike directly

Mikes LP: 1400
Rax: 4000


Rax: Then ill attack your face down with Super Conductor Tyranno

Card flips up and is a
Solemn Angel



Rax: i'll end my turn by placing a face down card

Mike:
alright my turn, i draw, first i activate heavy storm then i play two cards face down and i...(to Castiel) im not too familiar with this deck what do i do?

Castiel: Just remember our duel, here let me help you

Castiel turns into a card and goes in Mike's hand

Mike:
Alrigght i sacrifice Solemn Angel to summon
Castiel, the Angel Knight in attack mode

now i end my turn

Rax: big mistake, sounds like you have a lot to learn lets end this now shall we, my turn i draw

Mike: not so fast! first i activate drop off which destroys the card you just drew, then i pay 500 lifee point to end your turn with
Death's Hourglass


Mikes LP: 900
Rax LP: 4000


GASPS

Mike: now its MY turn, i draw, alright now i activate Cost Down which means i can summon
White Dawn Angel in attack mode

Then i activate its effect, which lets me bring to my hand a
Black Dusk Angel, which by that effect i can special summon it in attack mode

Now i activate Angel's Assassin Effect

You can reveal this card in your hand, during your Main Phase, to send all cards in your hand to the graveyard. If this card is sent to the graveyard by this effect, you can Special Summon it to your side of the field. When this card is Special Summoned by this effect, destroy 1 card on your opponent's side of the field for every "Angel" monster you sent to the graveyard by this effect.
Since i sent it and trap stun to the graveyard i can destroy one monster on your side of the field and i choose Super Conductor Tyranno, then i can Special summon Angel's Assassin in attack mode, now you may not have noticed but i have 4 angel monsters on the field which means Castiel gains an additional 800 attack boost which makes his new attack 3300.
Now, Angel's Assassin attack his Black Tyranno,

Angel's Assasin gets his sword out and slashes Black Tyranno, black tyranno is destroyed

Now, Black Dusk Angel attack Directly

Rax's LP drop to 2800
End this duel, Castiel

Castiel's wings spread as wide as the whole field, he flies up high and dives down gracefully winning the duel
Rax's LP drop to 0
Holograms fade


Rax: Stay after class Mike i need to speak to you

Mike: AGAIN!?!?! see this is why no one likes teachers

TO BE CONTINUED


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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Wed Aug 26, 2009 7:13 pm

lol the ending was funny. seriously, no one likes a teacherr.
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Wed Aug 26, 2009 11:14 pm

CHAPTER 4: The Hidden Ones

After, Ms. Rax and Mikes duel the bell rings everyone leaves except Mike, Ms. Rax and a girl who stops to talk to Mike

Girl: Hi..Mike, is it? uhm my name is Jaime
Jaime: I just wanted to say, that i love that winged-beast deck is awesome, uhm i want to give you this as a present

Jaime gives Mike an envelope and leaves

Mike: Thanks...

Ms. Rax: you can open that at home Mike, i wanted to talk to you about your deck, you have creatures i've never seen before, and im just wondering where you got them

Mike: they were a gift

Rax: is there anyway i can contact whom ever gave these cards to you?

Mke: uhh...

Castiel: I dont trust her look into her eyes

Her eyes were marvelous, her pupil was red with a bit of black

Rax: you see Mike, my first name is Angela
Angela: I am sure and positive that you know about...The Fallen ones and the The Risen, but i doubt you know about The Hidden Ones....

Mike: im sorry Angela i dont know what--

Castiel: wait let her talk we might be able to get something out of this

Mike: nevermind

Angela: the Hidden Ones are so secretive that the only person who knows about them is their members, and now you, see the Fallen Angels are angels that did something wrong and were downgraded but given another shot to redeem themselves, and the Risen Ones were demonic angels who were risen up to the earth to wreck havoc upon it, but the Hidden Ones are both kinds of angels that have decided to break the rules and reside as normal living humans

Mike: wh-what kind are you?

Angela: (very silently) i am...a RISEN ONE (now yelling) and i must get a hold of your deck

Angela jumps on top of her deck and transforms into an angel with red wings

Demon-Angela: and in order to get lowered back to my home i must get a hold of one of your cards and take it to...our king

Angela grabs mike by his shirt collar and lifts him up

Mike: CASTIEL!!!

Castiel: guys we gotta help him

Angela reaches for his deck but the cards turn into monsters before she can reach them
Angela raises her hand and throws mike to a corner then a cage fell around Mike


Castiel: we cant afford this! guys help Mike out

A light shines bright from Castiel and switches places with Mike, now Castiel is in the cage and Mike is with the other angels

Mike: duel me! for Castiel, if i win hes free and you leave, if you win...you can take me as well

Castiel: no!!!

Demon-Angela: i accept, get your duel disk out this is gonna get ugly

Castiel: NOOO

The angels form a deck in Mike's duel disk, and angela forms an outer wall around the cage so Castiel can't be heard
They both get their duel disk out and the LP is set to 4000


Demon-Angela: Foolish mortal now you will see what a real duel is like...in the Dark Side!!!

Mike: whatt

Demon-Angela: Dark Side activate! surround this foolish mortal and myself so he knows what real pain feels like

Darkness surrounds both players as they draw their opening hand, Mike understands that a duel in the Dark Side means he will feel the pain of his monsters

Demon-Angela: its ladies first, so make your move

Mike: i'll take that....now i draw i place one monster face down in defense and i'll throw two face downs and end my turn

Demon-Angela: that was weak let me show you how to really duel, i draw, i summon DD Survivor [4*1800/200] in attack mode then--

Mike: i activate bottomless traphole which removes it from play

Demon-Angela: ill place one card face down and end my turn

DD Survivor comes back to the field

DD SURVIVOR: When this card is removed from play while face-up on your side of the field, you Special Summon it during the End Phase.

Mike: alright i draw, i place one card face down, then i flip summon Solemn Angel


then i activate Shield and Sword [Switch the original ATK and DEF of all face-up monsters on the field until the end of this turn. Any additions and subtractions to ATK and DEF due to card effects are applied to the new ATK and DEF. Monsters summoned after this card's activation are excluded.]
Now your Survivors attack is 200 while my angel's is 2500, now Solemn Angel attack!

Solemn attacks DD Survivor and destroys him
Angela's LP drop down to 1700

I'll end my turn

Shield and sword disappears

Demon-Angela: I draw, ok now the real duel begins lets hope your ready for this you foolish mortal

Mike: if you call me that one more time i swear i will yell!

TO BE CONTINUED
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Thu Aug 27, 2009 3:18 am

Man this stuff is good that chapter 5 bttr be coming out soon cause i gotta see how this duel ends.
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Thu Aug 27, 2009 6:51 pm

FALLEN ANGELS CHAPTER 5: The Hidden Ones Part 2

We left off in the middle of Mike and Angela's duel. Mike had summoned Solemn Angel and Angela had DD Survivor in her field, but using Shield and Sword Mike was able to attack DD Survivor, destroy him and reduce Angela's LP

Angela LP: 1700
Mike LP: 4000
It is currently Angela's turn, Mike has one face down and Solemn angel on his side of the field


Demon-Angela: Now special summon Evil Hero Infernal Prodigy [2*300/600]
INFERNAL PRODIGY: If you control no monsters, you can Special Summon this card from your hand in face-up Attack Position. If you Tribute this card to Tribute Summon an "Elemental Hero", "Destiny Hero", or "Evil Hero" monster, draw 1 card during this turn's End Phase.

Then i Tribute Infernal Prodigy to summon Evil Hero Malicious Edge [7*2600/1800]

MALICIOUS EDGE: If your opponent controls a monster, you can Normal Summon this card with 1 Tribute. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent.

Then i activate Double Summon with this i can normal summon another monster and i summon Evil Hero Infernal Gainer [4*1600/0] then i remove it from play so my Edge can attack twice

INFERNAL GAINER:During your Main Phase 1, you can remove this card from play and select 1 face-up Fiend-Type monster you control. That monster can attack twice during each Battle Phase. Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position during your second Standby Phase after you activate this effect.
Now Edge! attack solemn angel

Edge throws himself to Solemn Angel she is destroyed mikes LP drops to 2600

Heh..i guess you weren't as good a duelist as those winged...rats thought you were
Edge! End this duel

Edge attacks mike...BUT WAIT a force field protects mike and his life points climb to 5200

Mike: you didnt think i'd go down that easy did you, Angela, i activated Draining Shield [Negate the attack of 1 of your opponent's monsters and gain Life Points equal to its ATK.]

Demon-Angela: No matter, you will still lose next turn, ill end for now

Angela LP: 1700
Miked LP: 5200


Mike: My move (to himself) im still not familiar with this deck much, i've only used it once...i need help...Castiel if only you could help

Mikes deck shines and out comes Angel of Death, Angela seems un aware of whats happening...she sees everything normal

Death: I may not be Castiel but i can still help you!

Mike: Really?! thats awesome! alright well lets see here, i have Angel's knight which seem like i could pull off some sort of combo if i use his second effect

To Angela, Mike seems like hes concentrating on his next move, it doesnt even seem like he's talking

Death: You learn fast, young man it seems that you could also add Angel's Assassin into the equation to make a better move

Mike: Good idea! Alright, now i summon
Angel's Knight,

i play two face downs, then i activate Angel's Knight's Effect i can attack you directly
Angel Knight swords slash glide!

Angel knight attacks Angela her LP drop to 500

Demon-Angela: Very well played but may i remind you my Edge can still attack twice! and if i summon an additional monster i can take you down next turn

Mike: who ever said i was finished?
Now Knights Effect lets me search my deck and add any monster card to my hand and i choose Fairy Knight
NOW i end my turn

Mike has 4 cards in his hand

Death: Nice move Mike

Mike: but shes right i cant activate Assassin's effect only during my main phase plus none of my face downs will help me

Death: But that can change...remember who i am

Death lifts up her hourglass and throws it into one of Mike's face down cards

Mike: thanks death i know what to do now!

Demon-Angela: alright now its my move i draw then ill set three card face down and--

Mike: and thats about it cause i activate Death's Hourglass by paying 500 life points i can automatically end your turn

Mikes LP drop to 4700
It is now Mikes Turn


Mike: and now its my turn, i draw alright ill place another card face down then ill activate Angel's Assassin's Effect

You can reveal this card in your hand, during your Main Phase, to send all cards in your hand to the graveyard. If this card is sent to the graveyard by this effect, you can Special Summon it to your side of the field. When this card is Special Summoned by this effect, destroy 1 card on your opponent's side of the field for every "Angel" monster you sent to the graveyard by this effect.

I discard my whole hand

Angel's Assassin, Fairy Knight, Black Dusk Angel, and Jar of Greed

Mike: and since two Angel monsters went to the graveyard i can destroy your Edge, one face down, and i can special summon Angel's Assassin in attack position, next i activate Monster Reborn to special summon from my grave
Fairy Knight

Then, i'll synchro summon, by releasing Angel's Knight and Fairy Knight,
Fairy Angel of War, in attack position, which lets me return the tuned monsters back
to my deck


this is it Angela, get ready now Angel's Assassin attack her directly!

Demon-Angela: not so fast! remember i still have 2 cards face down well one of them is Draining Shield, and just lie yours i gain your attacking monster's total attack

Angela's LP rises to 3100


Mike: you might not lose this turn but you will the next, i have one more monster in attack, now Fairy Angel of War Attack directly

Demon-Angela: boy OH BOY are you wrong, we're just getting warmed up! now i activate Magic Cylinder which re-directs Angel of Wars attack to your life points

Mikes LP drops to 2400
Angela's LP : 3100


Demon-Angela: you are a strong duelist but you'll need more than some...Angels to defeat me!

Mike: Grr....i'll end my turn

Demon-Angela: of course you will!

Angela Laughs Maniacally and starts her turn

TO BE CONTINUED
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Thu Aug 27, 2009 7:25 pm

well i'll admit. the last thing i was expecting was the teacher to be a part of this lol. dang teachers never do anything good...


ohh, and i love the chapters lol. cant wait for the rest of the duel


PS - you forgot to put Death's Hourglass card image in where Mike uses it lol.
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Thu Aug 27, 2009 7:28 pm

Yup NEVER anything good lol, i didnt think the hourglass was necessary since he used it in a duel above, but Assassin's Effect might be more easily forgotten which is why i posted that
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Thu Aug 27, 2009 7:31 pm

Phoenix Enforcer wrote:
Yup NEVER anything good lol, i didnt think the hourglass was necessary since he used it in a duel above, but Assassin's Effect might be more easily forgotten which is why i posted that


ohh lol. gocht'ya. i still like to repost the images but thats just me.
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Thu Aug 27, 2009 7:33 pm

yup, we have different tactics...some are good some...arent lol but most are
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Thu Aug 27, 2009 8:28 pm

Ill try that though
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Thu Aug 27, 2009 9:48 pm

FALLEN ANGELS CHAPTER 6: The Hidden Ones Part 3

We left off during Angela and Mike's duel mike attacked with Angel's Assassin but she countered with Draining Shield, then Mike attacked with Fairy Angel of War but she countered with Magic Cylinder, current LP
MIKE: 2400
ANGELA: 3100
Mike has Fairy Angel of War, Angel's Assassin, and a face down, Angela has nothing


Demon-Angela: alright now i draw...hmm i've been thinking maybe we should wager something BIGGER than just a freeing of Castiel, how about if i win, you have to give up your like to our...King, and if you win...ill give my body to the Angel's ill join forces with them, what do you say

Mike: Death...what do i do?

Death: Castiel wouldn't go for it but she's very powerful and would be a big help to our forces

Mike: its a deal!

Death: i never said to go for it!!!

Demon-Angela: now you cant take that back, its set and ready, now you better get ready i activate Lightning Vortex, which by discarding one card can destroy both your monsters

Death: you'll be defenseless!?!?!

Lightning starts to come down on both monsters


Mike: I activate Solemn Judgement, i pay half my Life points to negate its activation

Mike's LP drops to 1200, the lightning fades before it hits the monsters


Demon-Angela:
UGH, oh well i play one card face down and ill end my turn

Mike: i draw (holding just one card) this ends now, Angela! I activate Heavy storm which destroys your face down card

Storm blows over the face down card, Negate attack is destroyed

Mike: Alright angel's Assassin attack directly

Angela's LP drops to 500

Mike: END THIS NOW!! go Fairy Angel of War, attack directly

Angel of War shoots with his Rocket Launcher, something seems to intercede, smoke clogs up the field

Demon-Angela: Thank Pegasus for Kuribohs!

Mike: Grr. alright ill end my turn, and for the record...what kind of deck has a DD Survivor, Evil Heroes, and Kuribohs?

Demon-Angela: the smart kind! now i draw (holding three cards) alright i place one card face down and ill set this monster in face down defense

Mike: Alright! im tired of this, this must end!!!...especially your randomly assorted deck...seriously choose a card type, anyways i draw alright i attack, go Fairy Angel attack his face down

Demon-Angela: i activate, Mirror Force

Mike: Oh no! that destroys all attack position monsters on my side of the field

Both monsters on Mike's side of the field are destroyed!!!

Death: and the card in your hand wont help you...

Mike: theres gotta bee something....i cant just lose like this

Demon-Angela: my turn, i draw, luckily, i cant summon anything else besides my face down monster, i flip summon Magician of Faith [1*300/400]
MAGICIAN OF FAITH: FLIP: Select 1 Spell Card from your Graveyard. Add the selected card to your hand.

Mike: THAT CARD IS BANNED!!

Demon-Angela: we're in the dark side, Mike, there are NO rules here, i bring double summon back to my hand, now Magician attack Mike directly with Dark Side Smash!

Mikes lp drops to 900
Angela's LP: 500
Somehow with Dark Side Smash, mikes goes flying back landing on his back and the envelope falls out mike is hurt badly


Death: Mike!!!! are you ok?

Mike sits up, sees the envelope mysteriously given to him by Jaime and tries to pick up the envelope, but it seems heavy for him, he tries but the envelope wont budge, finally another glow occurs from the envelope, mike is almost blinded my the light and has to close his eyes when he opens his eyes, there's no envelope on the floor. but his disk glowed for about 5 seconds then it stopped

Mike:
uhm...yeah im ok lets keep dueling

Demon-Angela: did that hurt, do you want a bandaid? heh i set one card face down and end my turn, your move foolish mortal

Mike yells

Mike: i've had just enough of your jokes Angela, your going down your gonna turn good and your gonna let Castiel go!!! My move, i draw!!! i active Allure of Darkness! [Draw 2 cards, then remove from play 1 DARK monster from your hand. If you don't have any DARK monsters in your hand to remove, send all cards in your hand to the Graveyard.]
i remove from play Black Dusk Angel, (holding 2 cards)

Death: looks like you needed something else, no rules, right angela? have it your way! Death raises her hand and a Pot appears in her hand she throws it at one of Mike's cards

Mike:thanks and wait whats this other card?

Death:im not sure i've never seen it before

Mike: alright now i activate the Pot of Greed, which lets me draw two cards from my deck (now holding three)

Death: i dont know any of the cards in your hand, Mike, maybe it had to do with the envelope

Mike: then lets test them out! i activate
Winged Reinforcement

which...apparently lets me summon two winged-beasts monster from my grave and i special summon Angel's Assassin and Angel's Knight Now i remove those cards from play to special summon
ANGEL LORD!!!

This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card cannot be special summoned except by removing from play from your side of the field two "Angel" monster. When this card is special summoned destroy one card on the field This card's attack becomes the removed from play monsters' attack.

And when its special summoned, i can destroy a card on your side of the field, and i choose your face down, Angel Lord's attack and defense is 3800

Mirror Wall is destroyed

Mike: Now Angela get ready to be pushed into the light! Angel Lord attack, her Magician of Faith

Angela's LP drop to 0, then Angel Lord Goes up to her and shines and her body is changed she no longer has eyes of hatred, no longer has Demon Wings from now Demon-Angela/Angela/Ms. Rax is Angela the Dark Angel
Angela turns into a ball of light and then into a card falling into Mike's hand


the cage disappears and Castiel glides up to Mike to check if he is ok


Castiel: Mike are you OK

Mike: Im great thanks to death

Death: dont thank me thank that Jaime chick

Castiel: who is jaime?

Mysterious Girl: I am!
A silhouette of a girl is at the door suddenly the girl-silhouetted spreads Angel-like Wings

TO BE CONTINUED
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Fri Aug 28, 2009 12:33 am

amazing story
i'm fascinated
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Fri Aug 28, 2009 3:33 pm

i finally got too read it lol. your doing an awesome job so far.
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Sat Aug 29, 2009 11:15 am

thanks guys, ill be posting some more chapters today
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Mon Aug 31, 2009 4:37 pm

when is 7 coming? i'm dying to see our made together chapter lmao.
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Tue Sep 01, 2009 6:13 pm

waiting chapter 7
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Sat Sep 05, 2009 10:58 am

sorry for the big delay will be posting chapter 7 later today since i've been away and Ryan is going to be away so he's gonna miss it til monday
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