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PostSubject: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Tue Aug 25, 2009 9:36 pm

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FALLEN ANGELS CHAPTER ONE: THE ERUPTING VULCAN

We start this story with a duel that has already been started. After Mike, a young teenager in Twilight Duel Academy, bumps into a very easily-enraged Slifer Red, this leads to a duel which we will tune into now

Mike: Alright its my turn Mr. No-Name

Mike LP = 1000
No-Name LP =2000

Mike has no monsters or set magic/trap cards on his side of the field while No-Name has D.D. Survivor [4*1800/200] in attack mode


Mike: I draw, and what do you know just what i needed to end this duel, First i summon Blackwing - Sirocco the Dawn [5*2000/900] in attack mode.

BLACKWING-SIROCCO THE DAWN:If your opponent controls a monster and you control no monsters, you can Normal Summon or Set this card without Tributing.

Mike: then i activate lightning vortex by discarding one card i can destroy your DD Survivor!

*Mike discards Dark Armed Dragon and lightning comes down and destroys DD Survivor

Mike: Now sirocco end this duel!

Sirocco lunges at No-Name and he is defeated, holograms fade

Mike: Your very quiet for someone who just lost a duel

No-Name: My name is Gary

Gary: You better not bump into me again or things wont go so easily for you.

Gary walks away to his next class

Mike: Strange guy...and hes made me late to class Mr. Vulcan is gonna erupt!

Mike runs to his next class

Mr. Vulcan Glad you decided to join us Mike, what's your excuse this time?

Mike: Im sorry Mr. Vulcan i got caught up in a duel with some Slifer named Gary

Everyone laughs

Mr. Vulcan I'm sorry to disappoint you but there is no Slifer by the name of Gary to my knowledge

Mike: Well your knowledge is wrong...no offence....

Mr. Vulcan: Well lets see how our knowledges pair against each other, Mike get your duel disk out!

Mike: Alright!!

Both players get their duel disks out and the LP are set to 4000

Vulcan and Mike: Duel!

Vulcan: I'll start this off, now kids pay attention to see how a real duel goes on

Vulcan Draws

Vulcan: I summon Volcanic Rat [1*500/500] in attack mode! then ill throw down two face downs and end my turn

Mike: My turn, I draw...Perfect!...Alright kids lets show Mr. Vulcan here how to really play duel monsters! I activate Heavy storm

Vulcan: uh-oh

Sakuretsu armor and mirror force get destroyed

Mike: Now ill activate Black Whirlwind [When a "Blackwing" monster is Normal Summoned to your side of the Field, you can add 1 "Blackwing" monster from your Deck to your hand that has less ATK than that monster.]
Now i summon Blackwing Sirocco the dawn and thanks to black whirlwind i can add blackwing- gale the whirlwind [3*1300/400] to my hand which now i can special summon along with blackwing-bora the spear [4*1700/800]

BLACKWING-GALE: If you control a "Blackwing" monster other than "Blackwing - Gale the Whirlwind", you can Special Summon this card from your hand. Once per turn, you can halve the ATK and DEF of 1 face-up monster your opponent controls.

BORA THE SPEAR: If you control a "Blackwing" monster other than "Blackwing - Bora the Spear", you can Special Summon this card from your hand. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent.

Mike: Talk about pulling a Crow Hogan, now i activate siroccos effect which makes gale's total attack 5000

Vulcan: Enough of this you did a missplay you will stay in for school detention

Holograms fade, Vulcan leaves the room

Mike: Missplay? What did i do?

Bell rings everyone leaves except Mike
Vulcan comes in the room


Vulcan: Mikey, Mikey, Mikey what will i ever do with you?

TO BE CONTINUED


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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Sat Sep 05, 2009 4:22 pm

CHAPTER SEVEN: A Mysterious Being

Mike defeated the wretched Angela and turned her to the good side and it was all thanks to some cards given to mike by Jaime but who is Jaime? lets find out!

Mike: who or what are you and how did you get these cards?

Jaime Silhouette: You will find out who i am as time passes but for now...take these cards

The girl throws another envelope and mike catches it he looks down then he turns up....Jaime is gone.

Mike: where'd she go castiel?

Castiel: i dont know, she just disappeared put the cards in your deck with us

Castiel and Death turn into cards and go into the deck, the envolope shines bright then disappears the duel disk is now glowing.

???: I'll take that!

A stranger comes out from the closet, pushes Mike down, and takes his deck then he and another stranger covered in black robes meet up and race up to the roof, mike gets up and chases them up
Mike is at the rooftop of the academy after some mysterious men dressed in black robes stole his deck and ran up



Mike: what do you creeps want with my deck, you’re not Fallen Angels, The Risen, or even Hidden ones

Creep 1: what are you talking about
Mike: oh uhm…

Mike: i..uh…just give me my deck back now

Creep 1: as if

Creep 2: we’ve seen you duel

Mike: who are you and what do you want with my deck

They both take of their black robes and mike sees some familiar faces

Mike: Mr. Vulcan and Gary!!!

Vulcan: now that you know who we are we can’t let you leave because you’ll just call the police and this deck is too strong and rare to be in a child’s hands

Mike: wait a second I only dueled both of you with my blackwing deck and those cards aren’t to rare…

Gary: we saw your new cards Mike, don’t even try to play dumb with us

Vulcan: Gary is right, we’ve never EVER seen these cards before

Gary: which is why we are keeping these

Vulcan: good bye Mike

Mike: wait no

Gary pushes Mike of the edge of the rooftop mike is falling quickly

Mike: CASTIEL!!!!!

Castiel goes out of the deck and follows the sound of Mikes voice
Mike feels someone has saved him


Mike: that was fast Castiel thanks

Castiel: what the heck? Mike it’s not me

Mike turns around to see it isn’t Castiel but some other kind of angel the angel brings mike down to safety where another person is standing


Mike: who are you two?

???: Hey my name is Ryan
Ryan: I saw you falling of that building’s rooftop are you ok? What happened up there?

Mike: my name is Mike, My teacher stole my deck and some creep pushed me off the rooftop

Ryan: seems like a crazy school, Aeolus take care of Mike, I’ll be right back

Mike: Aeolus?

Ryan turns into a white aura and disappears the mysterious angel stays with them

Mysterious Angel: I am Aeolus

Castiel: so what kind of angel are you?

Aeolus: what do you mean?

Castiel: like a Risen a Fallen, or a Hidden?

Aeolus: I don’t understand

The white aura re-appears and so does Ryan

Mike: how do you do that?

Ryan: is this your deck?

Ryan hands Mike a deck

Mike: yeah this is it

Ryan: I couldn’t help but see that you have a winged beast deck with cards that I’ve never seen before, im curious where these cards are from and you have a spirit monster too I see?

Mike: they were a gift, and yeah you could say that, this is Castiel

Castiel: hello

Ryan: nice to meet you listen, Mike, I have to go now, but I think Aeolus would work very well you’re your deck I give you my card, Aeolus, Rising Wind

Mike: rising…Castiel!

Castiel: I don’t think he is a Risen mike he wouldn’t of saved you

Ryan: what?

Mike: uhm nothing, ok if you really think he would help my deck then sure
Aeolus turns into a card, Ryan hands mike the card

Ryan: I really think so, but I got to go, Nice meeting you

Mike looks down at Aeolus, Rising Wind for a second the looks up, Ryan is gone

Mike: uhm…bye

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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Mon Sep 07, 2009 5:06 pm

favorite chapter by farr Razz now i think its about time i make my newest chapter.
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Mon Sep 07, 2009 6:22 pm

Awesome! cant wait
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Thu Sep 10, 2009 7:58 pm

NEED MORE!!! POST MORE!!! or i will hurt you..... LOLZ Razz
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PostSubject: chapter 8 revised, and re edited went anotehr direction with this one   Sat Sep 12, 2009 10:52 am

FALLEN ANGELS CHAPTER 8: Old Friends

Mike and Castiel are now in front of the building and Ryan is no longer there

Mike: where'd he go? and what'd he do to Gary and Vulcan?

Castiel: im not sure

Mike: ok then...well lets go

Castiel: where?

Mike: shouldnt you know?

Castiel: uhhh

Mike: aaagh!! we're hopeless

Voice: MIIIIIIIIIIIIKE!

Mike: what was that?

Castiel: i dont know

Mike: well, you just dont know anything today do you

Voice: MIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIKKKKE!! stop talking to yourself and turn around

Castiel disappears, mike turns around to see an old friend running right at him

Mike: Larisa?!?! [Law-rih-saw]

Larisa hugs Mike

Mike: its been years!!

Larisa: AGES!!

Voice2: (panting) wait for me..guys

Mike: oh hi, Chris!

Chris: hi mike...hey is your sister still here?

Larisa: he still has a crush on her

Chris: like you on Mike

Larisa starts to blush

Mike: no..uhh shes out on vacation for the week so im alone, anyways what are you guys doing here?

Larisa: what we cant come visit our best friend?

Chris: anyways we better get going, we're getting a hotel with a pool

Mike: well you guys can stay at my house if you want, its lonely since only im there

Chris: nah we'd love the pool more

Larisa: Chris! we'd love to stay at your house mike

Chris: but the poool...

Mike: Chris, we have an inflatable one in the backyard

Chris: Awesome! lead the way

Mike leads Larisa and Chris to his house and settles them in it is now 8:30 pm, friday

Mike: so what do you guys wanna do?

Larisa: maybe just chill out here, watch some tv..you know

Mike: oh alright well im going to take a shower

Chris: can i get soemthing to eat

Mike: sure go ahead, make yourselves at home

Mike goes into the restroom and shuts the door, it is now 9:30,
Castiel appears


Castiel: im worried

Mike: about what?

Castiel: we still dont know who that jaime girl is and she already gave us another pair of cards did you see what they were?

Mike: no the cards are blank

Castiel: weird

Mike: yeah well if you excuse me im going to take a shower so leave

Castiel: fine

After a few minutes mike comes out of the shower and gets ready for bed it is now 10:00

Mike: alright you guys ready for..uhh

Mike sees that Larisa and Chris are already sleeping on the floor, he gets Chris up to his room in his bed, and as he carries Larisa to his Sister's room she wakes up

Larisa: (yawns) Mike...

Mike: Hi Larisa, im just taking you to my sisters bed, Chris is in mine

Larisa: where are you gonna sleep?

Mike: i'll just sleep in the couch

Larisa: no mike--

Loud crashes are heard outside, chris wakes up and rushes to where mike and larisa are, Mike puts Larisa down and peeks out the window

Chris: you ok sis?

Larisa: yeah, Mike whats going on?

Mike: i dont know, i cant see anything its pitch black out there with no lights on

Chris: Larisa go see

Larisa goes to the window, and peeks out

Mike: Larisa, if i didnt see anything i doubt--

Larisa: watch out!!

Larisa pushes mike out of the way of the window and falls on top of him, a car crashes through the window and barely misses Chris, Chris immediately runs to Larisa's side

Mike: how did you see that?

Larisa: lets go

Larisa stands up, picks up Mike, grabs Chris' and Mike's hand and starts running

Mike: care to tell me whats going on?

Larisa: not now we have to get far away

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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Sat Sep 12, 2009 1:02 pm

was worth the wait

excelent chapter
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Sat Sep 12, 2009 3:17 pm

hmm. quite an interesting chapter lol. Larissa do you have a secret you'd like too telll us?
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Sat Sep 12, 2009 5:51 pm

Larisa with one "s" get it right lol jk

thanks leonfelix
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Sat Sep 12, 2009 7:28 pm

FALLEN ANGELS CHAPTER 9:

Larisa, Mike, and Chris are now behind the same building mike fell off, after a car crashed through the window of Mike's living room

Mike: Larisa whats going on

Larisa: shhh keep quiet they might be close

Chris: Larisa...maybe you should just tell me

Mike: tell me what

Larisa:...ok...fine mike what im about to tell you might not be easy to hear but i guess now you must know it

Mike: what is it?

Larisa: i...i...im--

Gunshots are heard a bullet is about to hit mike

Larisa: Chris!!

Chris puts his hands together and the bullet falls down before hitting mike's head as if it hit a steel wall

Mike: woah!!

Larisa grabs Mike and Chris by the hand and a bright light appears when the light dims out they're gone

Mike: where are we? its pitch black!

A light appears when mike looks for the source he sees Chris is glowing

Mike: ok now i really need to know whats going on

Chris: *sight*

Larisa: ill tell you

Mike: ok then

Larisa: we are cherubs

Mike: whats that

Chris: a cherub is the rank just below angel

Mike: are you serious!! wait how come you guys have special powers then?

Larisa: we are cherubs because we live on earth as humans and to save people on earth we need powers

Mike: Castiel!!!

Larisa: what?

Castiel appears

Castiel: you called?

Mike: did you know about this?

Chris: who are you talking to?

Mike: Castiel let them see you

Castiel turns into human form

Larisa: woah whered you come from?

Castiel: im always around

Castiel spreads his wings for a second the goes back to human form

Chris: woah, an angel, well, we're cherubs

Castiel: really!?!? i thought that was a myth, Mike, they'd be a good help to us

Mike: yeah....hey guys i lied about my sister...shes not on vacation...she got kidnapped

Chris: WHAT!?!?!?!

Larisa: oh no!

Castiel: Guys watch out!!

a net falls on Chris, Larisa, and Castiel as he's trying to save them, a man walks in he is wearing a lab coat and glasses

Man: Anti-Cherub-Magic-Net...our latest invention

Mike: who are you!?!?!

Man: call me Professor Kooz
Prof. Kooz: and we want you!

Mike: what?!?!

Castiel: leave him alone!!

Larisa: Mike run!

Prof. Kooz: not quite...hes coming with me

Mike: not without a fight!

Prof. Kooz: get your deck out then!

Mike and Kooz's life points are set to 4000, they both draw 5 cards, the darkness from the Dark Side surrounds both of them

Mike: not this again....

Kooz: ill start! i draw...hmm, i summon Krebons [2*1200/400] in attack mode i'll end there for now

Mike: my move! i draw. alright i summon
Solemn Angel in attack mode!

Then i activate Shield and Sword [Switch the original ATK and DEF of all face-up monsters on the field until the end of this turn. Any additions and subtractions to ATK and DEF due to card effects are applied to the new ATK and DEF. Monsters summoned after this card's activation are excluded.]
which makes Solemn's attack 2500 then i set one card face down and active fissure [Destroy the 1 face-up monster your opponent controls that has the lowest ATK.]

Kooz: uh oh

Mike: ''uh oh'' is right Solemn Angel attack! Wing Gale attack!

Solemn angel flaps her wings and creates a giant gale Professor Kooz's life points drop to 1500

Mike: i end my turn

Castiel: you show him mike!

Chris: his whole deck is full of angels!

Larisa: amazing!

Kooz: ...whatever...its my turn now, i draw!... hehe perfect! I summon Magical Scientist [1*300/300] in attack mode then i pay 1000 to special summon, from my fusion deck....

MAGICAL SCIENTIST: Pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon 1 Level 6 or lower Fusion Monster from your Extra Deck in face-up Attack or Defense Position. That Fusion Monster cannot attack your opponent's Life Points directly, and is returned to your Fusion Deck at the end of the turn.

Kooz's LP drop to 500

Mike: oh no

Larisa: Mike!!

Castiel: this is gonna be big....

Chris: you can do it mike!

Kooz: I summon...

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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Sat Sep 12, 2009 8:03 pm

holy smokes what a cliffhangerr lol. nice way too keep me waiting Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Sat Sep 12, 2009 8:56 pm

Yeah lol!
i might post the next chapter tonight
maybe even 2 tonight cause i was absent and i couldnt a few days ago
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Sat Sep 12, 2009 11:16 pm

Here's a short one for you guys

FALLEN ANGELS CHAPTER 10: Kooz the Mad Scientist

Mike is in a duel to save his life as well as his friends, his opponent, Professor Kooz, used the dark side in the duel, and has 500 life points, mike has a full 4000, but Kooz summoned and activated Magical Scientists effect which lets him summon any fusion monster with a level of 6 or lower

Kooz: i summon Dark Flare Knight [6*2200/800]

Kooz: then i activate graverobber

Mike: thats a trap!!

Kooz: in the dark side all magic and trap cards are treated as Quick-Play MAGIC cards and you can activate them during any phase and anyones turn

Mike: theres so much to worry about in the dark side, the field, the grave and now the hand

Kooz: like i was saying...i activate graverobber Select 1 card from your opponent's Graveyard. You can use that card as if you were its controller until the end of the turn. i activate Shield & sword which you already know switches attack and defense

SOLEMN ANGEL: 2500atk
FLARE KNIGHT: 800atk


Mike: that only helps me...

Kooz: not exactly, now Flare Knight attack his solemn angel

Mike: you lose!

smoke is covering the field....the smoke clears up and theres a different monster than Flare Knight

DARK FLARE KNIGHT: Any damage to the controller of this card from battle involving this monster becomes 0. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard as a result of a battle, Special Summon 1 "Mirage Knight" from your hand or Deck.

Kooz: Mirage Knight is on my side now, and his attack is normal, plus he has a very good effect

[8*2800/2000]MIRAGE KNIGHT:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Dark Flare Knight". When this card battles another monster, during damage calculation increase the ATK of this card by the original ATK of the opponent's monster. During the End Phase after this card was involved in battle, remove this card from play.

Kooz: go Mirage Knight! Attack his Solemn Angel! and his effect gives him 2500 more attack points which means you lose 2800 life points!!

Mikes LP drops to 1200
Kooz = 500


Kooz: lucky for you, he gets removed from play, but i can still attack with magical scientist, go my scientist attack!

Mikes LP drop to 900

Castiel: c'mon Mike you can recover

Chris: show that creep who's boss

Larisa: you can do it mike

Mike: good move...but im sure this duel is over

Kooz: i wouldnt be too sure

Mike: you scientist has 300 atk and you have 500 lp i just need to get a monster with more than 799 atk points and your done for

Kooz: lets see it then

Mike: my move, i draw, alright now i activate, pot of greed, and jar of greed allowing me to draw 3 more cards (to himself:)hmm quite a bit of new cards, and one that looks a little like Castiel, probably the ones from the envelope...

Kooz: i supposed to get you to the lab by 12, and its 11:30...so if you could hurry it up...

Mike: i summon Celestial, the Angel Reinforcer


Castiel: what?!?!

Chris: hey, cast that looks just like you

Larisa: woah, shes beautiful

Mike: Celestial, attack his Magical Scientist!

Kooz: so predictable, i activate, from my hand, MAGIC CYLINDER which re-directs the attack back at you, meaning you lose!

Celestial turns around and hits Mike, Mike is knocked down by the net, holograms fade

Larisa: MIKE!

Chris: C'mon buddy wake up!

Castiel: NOOOOOOOOOOO

Kooz: ooh i wonder if ill get paid this time

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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Sun Sep 13, 2009 3:17 pm

nice chapter, but wow total unfairness lol.
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Sun Sep 13, 2009 3:40 pm

Yeah, right, i know.
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Sun Sep 13, 2009 5:59 pm

Worked hard on this one you better leave me feedback >=P

FALLEN ANGELS CHAPTER 11: The Secret of Jaime

Mike was defeated by the unfairity of the Dark Side Kooz, the mad scientist, is now going to get Mike to a lab to do research on him, yet we dont know why


Kooz: mwahahaha

Castiel: im going to kill you when i get out of here

Larisa: you monster!!!

Chris: let us go and play fair!

As kooz is about to pick up mike when someone falls on him and kicks him in the back then she spreads her wings

???: Leave my brother alone!!

Castiel, Chris, & Larisa: Jaime!?!?!

Castiel: of course! mike's sister and the mysterious card-giver have the same name...they must be the same person

Jaime: well done, Castiel, im not sure how mike wasnt able to figure that out

Jaime tears open the net Larisa and Castiel run immediately to Mike, Chris stays with Jaime

Castiel: Larisa, can you heal him?

Larisa puts her hands over mike a bright light comes from them...when the light dims out mike wakes up

Mike: what happened, why is Kooz, knocked out on the floor? and...is that...JAIME!!

Mike runs to hug Jaime

Mike: its true! you are an angel, but how did you escape and why is one of your wings red? and ...woah! your the Jaime who keeps, secretly, giving me cards

Jaime: oh mike so much you need to know

~~~~~~~~~~Jaime is telling the following story:~~~~~~~~~~

Jaime is home cooking just before school dismisses and Mike comes home, she hears a knock and goes to the door, she opens it and she sees two men in black suits with shades at the door

Jaime: may i help you?

Man1: actually yes, but all you need to know for now is my name is Gad, and my partner's name is, Wendell

The man puts some sort of "sphere" on the floor, the he and the other man put on gas masks, smoke starts to come out of the sphere and Jaime passes out

Gad: alright put her in the back set and tie her up

Wendell picks up Jaime ties her hands,feet and puts duct tape on her mouth

Gad: now get in the car i'll drive

As the car skids away, Mike sees the car go and runs after it he then falls down and becomes unconscious

Gad: we are so in for a raise

Wendell: i definitely hope so

Gad: check on the girl will ya

Wendell: where could she possibly go

As Wendell turns around Jaime spreads her wings and goes out the roof-window

Wendell: Gad shes out!!

Gad: what!!

Gad reaches for her leg but grabs the ropes instead and they fall of her

Gad: idiot! do you know how to tie a knot?

Wendell shrugs then the ropes on Jaime's hands and the duct tape on her mouth fall off

Gad: IDIOT!!!

The car comes to a sudden stop, when Gad and Wendell look for Jaime, she is far away

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Jaime: and after that i was following Mike around to help him

Mike: wait but if your not really lost then what am i doing

Castiel: theres more evil than just Gad, and Wendell there's the Dark King who is the evil of evil

Chris: wow Jaime...thats an interesting story everything about you is interesting

Larisa: that still doesnt explain why one of your wings is red

Jaime: i had to pretend to be a double agent for them so i had this wing painted

Mike:
wow sis

Jaime: yet i am sorry, because i cannot stay with you guys if they see me with you they will know i am actually not evil, but Mike i must tell you a few things about the dark side and their minions

Mike: what is it

Jaime: with the help of these cherubs you can stop the dark side from coming into play when you duel, when any rules from the dark side appear have Chris light up and Larisa can project it into a ray and aim at your hand then catch the ray mold it into a ball and look through it, this will create a stronger ray and make the Dark Side disappear for a few seconds then your opponent will be shocked...literally

Chris: Thats easy

Larisa: im sure i can do it

Mike: uhm...

Jaime: here practice on me

Chris starts to light up, Larisa grabs Chris's shoulder and with the other hand produces a ray and shoots it at Mike's, hand, mike catches it, molds it into a ball and as hes putting it up to his eyes it disappears

Jaime: that was good you just have to be quicker, now i have to go

Chris: please dont

Castiel: Jaime, thank you for all your help, but we still dont know where to go

Mike: can you tell us where to go?

Jaime: just go back to the house there you will know whats next

Jaime disappears leaving behind another envelope
Mike Grabs the envelope it immediately disappears


Mike: well its in the deck now, you guys ready to go home?

Larisa: sure, but i cant hold three hands to Castiel is gonna have to go into your deck as well

Castiel: No Problem

Castiel disappears, Larisa holds mike and Chris's hand, they all teleport back home

Mike: i guess we have to find the clue then rent a hotel this place is a mess and its.... 3 AM...

Chris: is this something?

Larisa: Chris, it think you found something

Mike: what is it?

Larisa: a box, Chris open it

Chris opens the box and a light comes out of it and shines on Chris' face

Chris: AHHHHH!!!

TO BE CONTINUED
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Sun Sep 13, 2009 8:30 pm

DUNN DUNN DUUNNNNNNNN


lol still great i'll be waiting for the next.
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Thu Sep 17, 2009 6:09 pm

ehh not too long today =P

FALLEN ANGELS CHAPTER 12: A New Villains

We are now in Mike's house after encountering his sister, and learning that Larisa and Chris are cherubs, Chris has found a box, opened it and light came out of it.

Chris: AHHHHH!!!

Larisa: Chris Let it go!

Larisa slaps the box down to the floor

Mike: Chris are you ok?

Chris: yeah...im fine

Mike: Castiel, do you know what that could've been?

Castiel appears

Castiel: no...Chris are you sure you feel normal?

Larisa: like completely?

Chris: yeah..i...i need to use the bathroom

Mike: yeah, go ahead

Chris turns his back to the crew, makes an evil smile, his eyes glow red, and proceeds to the bathroom

Larisa: i hope he's ok

Mike: me too, i wonder what that light did to him...and what the box means

Castiel picks up the box and studies it without opening

Castiel: Well there is some sort of...bulb, like a light bulb, on the four sides of it

Mike: let me see

Mike takes the box away from Castiel

Larisa: maybe the bulbs tell us where to go or something

Chris comes out of the bathroom and the bulb nearest to Chris shines brightly

Chris: whats that

Mike: im not sure

Larisa: it seems to be telling us something about you

Castiel: i think you might be on to something Larisa

Chris: what are you guys talking about?

Suddenly the box opened immensely and engulfed all 4 of them, then the box closed, the all seem to be falling down in pure...nothingness everything was blank, finally the fall on top of....more blankness, they arent hurt

Larisa: where are we

Chris: somewhere inside the box...

Mike: everything is so ....empty and my duel disk is gone

Castiel: we have to find a way to escape

Mike: but theres like, literally, nothing around us!

Chris: hmm...maybe if-

Chris starts to glow, now everything is visible, they are in some sort of abandoned town in the middle of nowhere

Larisa: nice going Chris! but where are we now...

Mike: im not sure

Stranger: What are you doing here?!

They all turn around and recognize the stranger immediately

Chris: y-your're Grandmaster of the Six Samurai...my key card!

()

Grandmaster: Yes i am Grandmaster of the Six Samurai but im no card....

Mike: is every monster here real?

Grandmaster: Monster? What do you take me for! i Mean sure some of our inhabitants are ugly but not enough to be called monsters...

Another "monster" comes behind Grandmaster

Monster2: you ready, Grandmaster?

Larisa: and y-y-your....

Mike: Athena!

Larisa: yeah, and your in my deck also

()

Athena: uhm...deck? anyways who are you?

Larisa: im Larisa, this is my brother Chris, this is Mike, and thats Castiel over there

Athena: welcome! are you staying for the--

Loud crashes are heard...more like...giant footsteps

Grandmaster: Oh no Hes back!

Chris: who is

Mike: who could be that huge...

Castiel: Dark Armed Dragon?!?!

Grandmaster: the freak with crow wings is right!

Castiel: Hey!?!?! >:O

Athena: we have to get out of here, follow me guys! Larisa take my hand

Larisa grabs Athena's hand, Athena starts...hovering and leads the way

Castiel: Hey grandmaster you got Chris, Mike hold on tight

Castiel grabs mike and soars behind Athena, Grandmaster grabs Chris and puts him on his back then starts running very fast

Dark Armed Dragon sees this


DAD: Dont let them get away! Go forth, my minions!!!

Evil Hero Inferno Wing appears and chases after Castiel, Element doom appears and chases after Grandmaster, Darknight Parshath Chases after athena


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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Fri Sep 18, 2009 2:07 pm

lol whoa? totally wasnt expecting thiss. Ryan likes.
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Fri Sep 18, 2009 6:28 pm

Alright im going to start putting up character pictures (ill put a reminder for cards)

For the current main characters (Mike, Chris, Larisa, Jaime)

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Oh and some people were asking about Chris and Larisa, Chris is Larisa's brother, Larisa has a crush on Mike, and Chris has a crush on Jaime, Mike's sister xD

so...

Chris & Larisa - siblings

Mike & Jaime - siblings

Larisa wants in with Mike, and Chris wants in with Jaime lol

ENJOY!
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Tue Sep 22, 2009 7:20 pm

Fallen Angels Chapter 13: The Wrath of Dark Armed Dragon

Mike, Larisa, Chris and Castiel were all imprisoned in some box...then they realized there was a world inside the box, where all monsters were real everyone could see and touch them, but there was also a threat Dark armed dragon, he commands Evil Hero Inferno Wing Element doom Darknight Parshath to chase after Castiel, Grandmaster, and Athena


Mike: we're not gonna make it Inferno Wing is faster than you

Castiel: ugh thats such an insult to me...

Chris: Element Doom is too fast he has both wings and fast feet

Grandmaster: im getting tired

Chris: try to keep going buddy...c'mon

Larisa: Darknight is too fast can't you go any faster?

Athena: im afraid not...but they dont want me...i know who you are now...i need to get you safe

Larisa: wha---

Athena threw Larisa up high and caused Grandmaster to trip and throw Chris up as well

Castiel: what in the world!?!

Mike: oh no! we gotta save em, Castiel

Castiel: i cant carry all three of you

Athena and Grandmaster shoot down Element Doom, Inferno Wing, and Darknight then they disappear

Chris & Larisa: Someone Help!!!!

Mike: ugh someone has got to do something!

Just then Mike remembered something that had happened to him the day before and immediately his Duel Disk Reappeared, Mike drew a card and held it up high

Mike: Come forth, Aeolus!! Save my friends

Aeolus: Im afraid i can only carry one

Chris: AHHH!!!

Mike: catch Chris!

Aeolus followed the sound of Chris' voice and catched him then put him down, Castiel put Mike down and they both raced up to try and catch Larisa
She was going down faster and when she got to the floor she landed safely, her duel disk appeared and was glowing


Chris: What the heck is wrong with Athena!

Larisa: its ok...im ok now

Mike: i think it was Jaime... every time she gives me an envelope with more cards my duel disk glows like that too

Castiel comes back down Aeolus goes back into a card and in Mikes deck

Chris: we have to get out of here before Dark Armed Dragon sends more of his minions against us

DAD: Wrong!!! I'll just come myself

Mike: Oh no

Larisa: what do you want!

DAD: A Duel!!!

Castiel: what?

Chris: why do you want a duel with us

DAD: not with you, Chris, i want a duel with Larisa and Mike

Castiel: why?

DAD: because i said so, now Nightmare Steelcage!!!

Steelcage surrounds Castiel and Chris

DAD: and now you have no choice

Mike: but it's two versus one

DAD: yes, but two are you and one is a giant, armed dragon who can control if you live or not

Larisa: fair with me

DAD: now lets duel

Mike: uhh...ready Larisa?

Larisa: Always!!

DAD's, Mike's and Larisa's LP is set to 4000, and all three players draw their opening hand

DAD: i'll start, now i draw, Perfect, i discard Plaguespreader Zombie to special summon Dark Grepher [4*1700/1600]

DARK GREPHER: You can discard 1 Level 5 or higher DARK monster to Special Summon this card from your hand. Once per turn, you can discard 1 DARK monster to send 1 DARK monster from your Deck to your Graveyard.


DAD: now i activate Plaguespreader Zombie's effect i return one of the cards in my hand to special summon him in attack mode [2*400/200]

PLAGUE:You can return 1 card from your hand to the top of the Deck to Special Summon this card from your Graveyard. If you do, remove this card from play when it is removed from the field.


Larisa: this isnt good...

DAD: not for you anyways, now i tribute Dark Grepher to summon Vampire's Curse [6*2000/800] now i Tune Plaguespreader Zombie and Vampire's Curse to synchro summon Dark End Dragon [8*2600/2100]

Mike: Whoa! talk about strong move

Larisa: Can you end now, we wanna take that dragon down along with you

DAD: haha i love how you measly little things think you can defeat me, ill set two cards face down and i'll end my mve

Larisa: My move! i Draw, (to herself) whoa i've never seen this card before...better keep it for a while (out loud) i'll play one monster face down in defense and ill set one card face down, ill end for now

Mike: alright my move now! i draw, (to himself) hmm new cards they seem useful (out loud) i activate Angel Call
which lets me look through my deck and choose an angel monster to take to my hand, and i choose Angel of Death, and i summon her in attack mode

then i activate her effect which destroys your monster and it costs me only 1300 Life Points, go Angel of Death! Scepter of death

Angel of Death slashes at Dark End Dragon with her scepter, and Mike's LP drops to 2700

Larisa: Nice move Mike!

DAD: hmm...strong

Mike: now i activate Heavy Storm

DAD: Grrr

DAD's Mirror Force and Magic Cylinder got destroyed, Larisa's Magical Arm Shield is also destroyed

Mike: sorry Larisa

Larisa: its fine

Mike: now, Angel of Death, attack directly

DAD's LP drops to 2400

DAD: my turn now, i draw

Larisa: nothing you can draw can defeat us now

DAD: i think you forgot who i am, and what's in my grave

Mike: exactly 3 dark monster!! oh no!

DAD: yes, because plaguespreader got removed from play, so its dark grapher, vampire's curse, and thanks to mike, Dark End Dragon, so i Summon MYSELF!
and i activate my special ability, by removing from my grave Dark End Dragon i can destroy Angel of Death, which means i can attack you directly and you will not only lose the duel but your soul as well

Larisa: no!

TO BE CONTINUED


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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Tue Sep 22, 2009 8:59 pm

DUN DUN DUN

lol niceeee cant wait for 14.
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Wed Sep 23, 2009 10:28 pm

Thanks! Glad you liked it.
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Tue Sep 29, 2009 2:09 pm

where's 14 T_T i bet it will be awesome like 13 Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Tue Sep 29, 2009 2:56 pm

cant wait till the next chapter

i wish those cards were real T_T


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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Tue Sep 29, 2009 7:02 pm

Lol thanks guys it'll be out later today and if not maybe tomorrow, i've been very busy recently but releases should be back to either 1 or 2 a-day so dont worry
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