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PostSubject: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Tue Aug 25, 2009 9:36 pm

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FALLEN ANGELS CHAPTER ONE: THE ERUPTING VULCAN

We start this story with a duel that has already been started. After Mike, a young teenager in Twilight Duel Academy, bumps into a very easily-enraged Slifer Red, this leads to a duel which we will tune into now

Mike: Alright its my turn Mr. No-Name

Mike LP = 1000
No-Name LP =2000

Mike has no monsters or set magic/trap cards on his side of the field while No-Name has D.D. Survivor [4*1800/200] in attack mode


Mike: I draw, and what do you know just what i needed to end this duel, First i summon Blackwing - Sirocco the Dawn [5*2000/900] in attack mode.

BLACKWING-SIROCCO THE DAWN:If your opponent controls a monster and you control no monsters, you can Normal Summon or Set this card without Tributing.

Mike: then i activate lightning vortex by discarding one card i can destroy your DD Survivor!

*Mike discards Dark Armed Dragon and lightning comes down and destroys DD Survivor

Mike: Now sirocco end this duel!

Sirocco lunges at No-Name and he is defeated, holograms fade

Mike: Your very quiet for someone who just lost a duel

No-Name: My name is Gary

Gary: You better not bump into me again or things wont go so easily for you.

Gary walks away to his next class

Mike: Strange guy...and hes made me late to class Mr. Vulcan is gonna erupt!

Mike runs to his next class

Mr. Vulcan Glad you decided to join us Mike, what's your excuse this time?

Mike: Im sorry Mr. Vulcan i got caught up in a duel with some Slifer named Gary

Everyone laughs

Mr. Vulcan I'm sorry to disappoint you but there is no Slifer by the name of Gary to my knowledge

Mike: Well your knowledge is wrong...no offence....

Mr. Vulcan: Well lets see how our knowledges pair against each other, Mike get your duel disk out!

Mike: Alright!!

Both players get their duel disks out and the LP are set to 4000

Vulcan and Mike: Duel!

Vulcan: I'll start this off, now kids pay attention to see how a real duel goes on

Vulcan Draws

Vulcan: I summon Volcanic Rat [1*500/500] in attack mode! then ill throw down two face downs and end my turn

Mike: My turn, I draw...Perfect!...Alright kids lets show Mr. Vulcan here how to really play duel monsters! I activate Heavy storm

Vulcan: uh-oh

Sakuretsu armor and mirror force get destroyed

Mike: Now ill activate Black Whirlwind [When a "Blackwing" monster is Normal Summoned to your side of the Field, you can add 1 "Blackwing" monster from your Deck to your hand that has less ATK than that monster.]
Now i summon Blackwing Sirocco the dawn and thanks to black whirlwind i can add blackwing- gale the whirlwind [3*1300/400] to my hand which now i can special summon along with blackwing-bora the spear [4*1700/800]

BLACKWING-GALE: If you control a "Blackwing" monster other than "Blackwing - Gale the Whirlwind", you can Special Summon this card from your hand. Once per turn, you can halve the ATK and DEF of 1 face-up monster your opponent controls.

BORA THE SPEAR: If you control a "Blackwing" monster other than "Blackwing - Bora the Spear", you can Special Summon this card from your hand. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent.

Mike: Talk about pulling a Crow Hogan, now i activate siroccos effect which makes gale's total attack 5000

Vulcan: Enough of this you did a missplay you will stay in for school detention

Holograms fade, Vulcan leaves the room

Mike: Missplay? What did i do?

Bell rings everyone leaves except Mike
Vulcan comes in the room


Vulcan: Mikey, Mikey, Mikey what will i ever do with you?

TO BE CONTINUED


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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Fri Oct 02, 2009 4:10 pm

Hehe...thats what gouken said too, but ok, thanks
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Fri Oct 02, 2009 6:21 pm

Fallen Angels Chapter 16: A New Arrival

Mike and Larisa managed to pull together and defeat DAD but as they were told he was not the strongest opponent they will face...


Mike: so...what now?

Larisa: i dont know...try to find jaime?

Chris: i think larisa has a good point

Mike: where would we find her?

Larisa: maybe--

The television suddenly turns on to announce breaking news

Announcer: Hello my name is Crystal from news 6, here to bring you breaking news, an airplane's wing broke off and now its comming down fast to central station, we now go to our helicopter cam

Announcer2: thank you, Crystal, we now tune in from the helicopter cam as the airplane is coming down with tremendous speed, and it seems to be falling into Central Station, the towns most beloved plaza-space

Mike: we have to do something!

Larisa: lets go!

Larisa grabs Mike and Chris' name and they teleport to central station

Chris: Look! the airplane is close!!

Mike: i got this, Aeolus Rising--

Aeolus appears but he does not look like he has before



Mike: Aeolus, Falling Wind?

Larisa: uhh...i dont think that will work put him back

Aeolus goes back into the deck

Chris: Larisa lets teleport up there

Mike: wont that be dangerous?

Larisa: to you, but not to us, i think we can do this, Mike

Larisa disappears but no one noticed

Mike: i want to go

Chris: c'mon Mike you know you cant survive up there let me and Larisa take care of this

Mike: but how will YOU two being up there make anything better

Chris: it just will, trust us on this, now Larisa--

Mike: Larisa??

Chris: where is she?

Larisa: (yelling from far away) Chris! make a mild force field now!! mike get away

Mike runs away and Chris puts his hands together, hoping no one will see what they can do

the airplane was falling fast until it hit the forcefield and slowed down, at the point Larisa jumped on the floor and held it with her hand, then she put it gently down

Larisa: ughh..thats kinda heavy

Mike: Whoa! super-strength?

Chris:
good job, Larisa and look the door is opening

Mike: i wonder who was on it

Many people ran out of the airplane and abandoned it, there was no one else except Mike Larisa and Chris

Chris: no one important i gues...lets go home before the media get all over this

Mike: what happened to the Helicopter cam?

Larisa: lets just say..it got excused, lets go home

Chris: no wait theres one more person...he seems hurt! we gotta go help him

the team runs up to the airplane dooor and carry him down

Larisa: hi, are you ok?

???: uhh...yeah, im ok...

Mike: my name is mike, thats Larisa, and this is Chris

??: hi everyone, my name is Gary
Gary: i flew in to check out some big yu-gi-oh tournament thats in town

Mike: (to himself) i hope hes not like the other gary ¬¬ (out loud)tournament? i havent heard anything about a tournament

Chris:
but we havent exactly been in-tune with town stuff, have we?

Larisa: guess not...

Gary: well, im new in town and i dont know where the card store is, mind showing me?

Mike: no, not at all, follow me

Mike leads the team and Gary to the card store and gary walks to the "used-cards" section

Larisa: you dont like brand new cards?

Gary: i do..i just wasted most of my money on that plane ticket, i only want one card though

Larisa: hmm...which one?

Mike:
i think that's kinda private Larisa

Gary: no, thats fine, heres the card now

Gary grabs the card and shows it to the team




Chris:
(gasp) thats...one of them...uhh...a vision! thats one of the ones that will stop us

TO BE CONTINUED


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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Fri Oct 02, 2009 6:26 pm

POST MORE!!!!
URGH!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Sat Oct 03, 2009 8:10 pm

Fallen Angels Chapter 17: Unexpected Enemies

Larisa and Chris saved an airplane from crashing into central station,
then on that airplane was a boy named Gary, he wanted to go to the card
store and showed them what card he wanted to buy, Chris said he saw that in a vision and he was gonna be their enemy


Gary: im sorry?

Chris: guys we have to stop him before he stops us

Gary: im just...here for a tournament

Mike: chris calm do--

Chris: is your name even, Gary?

Gary: i..uhh..of course it is

Chris: you hesitated

Larisa: Chris!!

Gary: no...no hes right...my name isnt Gary

Chris: i knew it!!

Mike: then who are you

Gary: no--i mean im still just here for a tournament...i just lied about my name

Larisa: why did you lie?

Gary: ...all my life..i just..move from place to place attending tournaments...hoping some day i might be the best...but no one ever wants to duel "Bruce" (my name) they...are...scared..

Mike: why...why are they scared

Chris: because he destroyed their lives!!!

Bruce: Thats not it! Dont talk about me like that! you dont know me...ugh

Bruce puts the card back and runs away


Larisa: Bruce!...wait....UGH Chris whats wrong with you!!

Chris: i saw hime clear in my vision

Mike:
are you sure you saw him...or the card?

Chris: I know what i sa--

Mike: chris?

Larisa: Chris!?!

Chris' eyes close the store turns pitch black, chris opens his eyes...his golden eyes

Larisa: Whats going on, Chris!

Evil-Chris: i saw the card!!...and i saw..Me

Mike: chris what are you--

Evil-Chris: i am not Chris...i am..the second Dark Ruler..here to stop you once and for all, Mike, you can just call me Goryu

the store lights back up to an empty space...surrounded by clouds

Mike: Bruce's card!!!

Larisa: where are we

Goryu: cant even recognize the sky anymore? pathetic

Mike: its still dark here...Goryu: i'd think you would recognize the dark side by now, Mike

Mike gets his duel disk out as in self defense


Larisa: mike be careful..

Goryu: hahaha you think im facing mike? Mike is just the object of power, but you, Larisa, as well as Chris are the channel to his power, so without you, mike is nothing but a simple person, Larisa get ready, we're dueling

Larisa: but--

Mike: you can do it Larisa i'll be supporting you all the way

Larisa: (to herself) but...Chris is my brother, and the dark side will hurt his body...

Larisa gets her duel disk out, both player's LP are set to 4000
A gust of wind passes through Larisa and her Duel Disk is left Glowing


Larisa: Another set from, Jaime...

Goryu: stop talking to yourself and get on with it already

Larisa: alright! ill start this off, i draw, i summon Allure Queen LV3 [3*500/500] in attack mode, ill place 3 cards face down and end my turn

Goryu:
now, i draw, and i summon Birdface [4*1600/1600] Birdface, attack her Allure Queen!

Larisa: not so fast!, i activate Negate Attack [Negate the attack of an attacking monster and end the battle phase.]

Goryu:
safe for now...i end my turn

Larisa: my move, and that means Allure Queen evolves into Allure Queen LV5 [5*1000/1000] and now i draw, i activate allure queen's effect

ALLURE QUEEN LV5: Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if this card was Special Summoned by the effect of "Allure Queen LV3", you can select 1 Level 5 or lower monster on your opponent's side of the field and equip it to this card. (Only 1 card at a time can be equipped due to this effect.) If this card would be destroyed by battle, the equipped monster is destroyed instead.


Larisa: that means i can equip birdface to her

Goryu: oh well...come on Larisa attack your poor defenseless brother..

Mike: dont listen to...uh...it, it is just trying to convince you not to attack it

Larisa: right...now i summon Breaker the Magical Warrior [4*1600/1000]
and since it has one counter its attack is now 1900, go breaker and allure queen attack directly

Goryu's LP drops to 1100

Goryu: ugh...seems that guilting you wont work, so i have to be offensive now, my move i draw, i summon Harpie Lady [4*1300/1400] now i activate Elegant Egotist [Special summon 1 harpie lady sisters from your hand or deck] and i special summon Harpie Lady Sisters [6*1950/2100] AND i activate Triangle Ecstasy Spark [Until the End Phase of this turn, the ATK of all "Harpie Lady Sisters" becomes 2700, your opponent cannot activate any Trap Cards, and the effect of every Trap Card on your opponent's side of the field is negated.] your DOOMED larisa theres no hope for you

Larisa: is that enough

Mike: its not strong enough dont listen to it

Goryu: Mike's right its not strong enough...now..but these 2 cards in my hand will change that, first in the dark side the current attack of a monster is treated as the original attack, so Megamorph doulbbes it to 5400, and shrink, halves your Breaker's attack to 950, and guess what? that IS enough for me to win this duel MWHAHAHAHAH

Mike: oh no!!

Larisa: AHH!

TO BE CONTINUED
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Sat Oct 03, 2009 8:23 pm

wow that last part 5400 to 950 on like the 3rd turn or something like that o_o

i probably wouldnt know what to do
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Sun Oct 04, 2009 7:27 pm

whoa i missed alot lol. i'll give individual feedback.


Chapter 15: thats my Anikados...lmao jk.
Chapter 16: its AeolEus, lol. but i was surprised that you changed him to fit my fan fic. that was cool.
Chapter 17: TOTALLY was not expecting what happened lmao.

all in all - awesome.
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Sun Oct 04, 2009 9:01 pm

15: oh sh!t...your right sorry...idk what to do hehe...
16: yeah lol i thought about it and it seemed appropriate =D
17: lol i like that, keepin you in surprise

all in all - thanks
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Sun Oct 18, 2009 8:52 pm

FALLEN ANGELS CHAPTER 18: TRUE IDENTITIES

previously,, chris was possed and challenged larisa into a duel, larisa
was winning then "Chris" now Goyu, cheated oh wait i mean "used the
dark side" (bleh ¬¬) will larisa save herself? or is the world doomed
just like her?
lets find out

Larisa:(to
self) what do i do, what do i do, omg im gonna die...hmm maybe if i try
a different approach (out loud) alright, Chris, no more fooling around

Goryu: you seemed to have forgotten who i really am

Larisa: no..you are, Chris i know it, and i know you know that too, Chris

Goryu: stop calling me that, Chris isnt here and he wont ever be again, so stop stalling and lets get on with me winning the duel

Larisa: you know..i envy you, Chris, because you, Chris, are always so calm and never worry, isnt that right, Chris

Goryu: GAH!! forget it, Harpie Lady Sisters, attack!

Mike:
Larisa!!!

Harpie
Lady Sisters lounge at Larisa in a triangle formation, they shoot the
ecstacy spark, it seems to hit, smoke is covering everything

Mike: LARISA!! NOOO

Goryu: mwahaha, and i didnt even have to summon myself

Smoke starts to clear, Larisa is seen standing with no monsters on her side of the field and a face up, spell card


Goryu: Impossible!!

Mike: What card is that?!!?

Larisa: Its the magic card, Black Magic - ATK!!


Mike: whoa!!!

Goryu: since there were no monsters on your field the attack was directed to you, but my monster's attack is 0

Larisa:
i think everyone knew that, you didnt have to explain it einstein..

Goryu: thats it you smart*bleep* (=P) girl, now the duel REALLY starts

Chris' body falls on the floor, Mike goes to get it and bring him back to where he was, Goryu appears in his true form


Larisa: Chris are you ok?

Goryu:
theres a huge, giant, monster in front of you and you only care about Chris?

Mike: he's ok larisa, ill keep him safe

Larisa:
thanks, Mike

Goryu: hello? big monster here, anyone care?

Larisa and Mike: ...whats to care for? *laughter*

Larisa: im not gonna waste my time on nothing, so end your turn so i can go

Goryu: ill set two cards face down and end my turn

Larisa: finally, my move, i draw

LP Goryu 1100
LP Larisa 4000


Larisa:
first, i activate heavy storm, to destroy both of your face down, then i activate foolish burial [Send 1 monster card from your deck to your graveyard]
and i send my cybernetic magician, now i activate Chaos Sorcerer's
effect from my hand, i remove from play my cybernetic magician, and my
breaker, to summon Chaos Sorcerer

CHAOS
SORCERER: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can
only be Special Summoned by removing 1 LIGHT and 1 DARK monster in your
Graveyard from play. Once per turn, you can remove 1 face-up monster on
the field from play. If you activate this effect, this card cannot
attack during this turn.


Mike: awesome, Larisa, this should end it

Larisa: i was hoping it would, but now you just jynxed it...

Goryu:
get on with your move already!!

Larisa:
hold your horses, im not done, next i summon (to herself) gosh..i hate
this card but it might help Chris (out loud) i summon absorbing kid
from the sky

a cloud comes out of no where and appears in the field...

Larisa: wheres my kid?

Mike: Larisa! Chris is gone...he turned in to pure light and disappeared

Larisa: Alright!! you mastered it Chris, now lets do this

Mike: huh? what in the world...?

the cloud turns into the shape of a chubby kid and its chris


Larisa: When did you get so chubby, Chris?

Absorbing-Chris: shut up

Mike: thats...awesome

Larisa: Chris, attack his harpie lady sisters, since Black Magic - ATK's effect is still on you can beat them easy

Goryu: Harpie Lady sisters are destroyed but my life points are not, i discard kuriboh

Larisa's life points rise to 5800

Absorbing
Kid: When this card destroys a monster and sends it to the Graveyard as
a result of battle, increase your Life Points by the Level of the
destroyed monster x 300 points.


Larisa: well your done either way...attack Chaos Sorcerer

Goryu: Harpie lady is done for, but im safe, see kuribohs arent limited and i just happened to have 2 in my hand

Larisa: yeah....i dont believe you, ill set one card face down and end my turn

Goryu: dont believe me, im a liar, i draw, now the duel starts larisa.. mwahahaha

Larisa: hate to burst your bubble, but you already said that..

[Goryu: welll....arent you a smart one

Larisa: yeah..smarter than you at least

Goryu: that was unecessary

Larisa: so is your face

Goryu: that doesnt make sense

Larisa: its cartoons..it doesnt have to make sense

Goryu: *sigh*]

Mike: you can do it Larisa

Chris: if i get sent to the graveyard, im telling the reaper to get you too

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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Sun Oct 18, 2009 9:00 pm

lol. this was amusingg. nice workk.
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Wed Oct 21, 2009 9:35 pm

ROFLMFAO!!!! DUDE!!!

NEED MORE!!! AND MAKE IT FUNNY LIKE THIS ONE!! Razz JK JK

NEED MORE!!
*has yet another hernia and goes to the hospital.. still muttering need more Razz)
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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Angels(Chapter 18 up) True Identities   Thu Oct 22, 2009 8:10 pm




Goryu: that was unecessary

Larisa: so is your face

lol xD
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