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PostSubject: My Fan Fic - The Rising prodigy (chapter 30 now up)   Mon Aug 24, 2009 11:39 am

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so i finally decided to make my first fan fic ever based on my Rising card series. and here it is at last. now remember, this is my first one i've ever done so be nice ahaa.

ALL MY CHAPTERS WILL BE POSTED HERE. YOU WILL HAVE TO CHECK BACK HERE TO SEE THE NEW CHAPTERS.

if you want to see my Rising card Archetype, click the following link:
http://twilightduelacademy.forumotion.net/card-showcase-f30/my-rising-card-series-t96.htm#285


Chapter 1 – the new kid in town



name: Ryan Karino
age: 17
deck type: Rising
Spirit Partner: Raziel, Rising Dawn


*We begin with Ryan sitting on a bench in a town he just moved to with his grandfather. The town is Corona, California. It’s about 4 o’clock and Ryan is just chilling their with his eyes closed when all of a sudden you hear Raziel’s voice right before appearing their next to him.


Raziel: Hey! What in the world do you think your doing?!

Ryan: (spastically) Whoa! Huh! Whaaaa? (Turns to see Raziel) Ohh, hey Raz what’s up?

Raziel: What’s up? What’s up is your grandfather told you to do one very small task while he went away for the day and you have yet to do that!

Ryan: (thinking deeply) Ohh right I forgot. Sorry. So…what did he want again?

Raziel: (sighs) You’re so hopeless…he wanted you to go get more bread for him cause you ate it all.

Ryan: If I’m as hopeless as you say I am, why do you continue to stick around with me ayy?

Raziel: (laughing) You know, I ask myself the same thing. But don’t forget I can leave whenever I want.

Ryan: (shocked) Whaaa? No don’t say that Raziel! I could never take another easy breath again if you were to leave!

Raziel: (laughing some more) So, I’m like asthma?

Ryan: (laughing with her now) Ahahaa. Let’s get the bread.


*Raziel Disapears. Ryan finally stands up and starts walking in the direction of the store.


Ryan: Umm. Hey Raz? I dont know where the store is...

Raziel’s voice: why don’t you ask around then? See that guy right there? ask him for directions.


*Ryan runs up to the man as the man turns around. They bump into each other. Turns out this man is easily tempered.


Man: Hey! Watch we’re ya going! Ya dig what I’m sayin?

Ryan: Whoa sorry bro. Chill out. (Whispering to Raziel) I think this guy thinks he’s ghetto ahaa.

Man: Who are you talking to now punk?

Ryan: (with some attitude) no one you can prove. Now who exactly are you?

Zach: the names Zach. And I don’t like your tude.

Ryan: Yea? Well you better get used to it cause my "tude's" not leaving. So what are you gonna do?


*Zach takes out a duel disk.


Ryan: You want to duel?

Zach: Is that not obvious? You’re a duelist aren’t ya?

Ryan: You better believe it.

Zach: So then lets go.

Ryan: You’re on!


*Raziel appears next to Ryan.


Raziel: Ryan, you’re being sidetracked again. The bread remember? Your grandpa’s coming home soon.

Ryan: Ah Raz you worry too much. This’ll be over quick.

Ryan & Zach: (together) Let’s duel!


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PostSubject: Re: My Fan Fic - The Rising prodigy (chapter 30 now up)   Sun Oct 18, 2009 6:45 pm

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
*endless clapping*

definitely worth the wait awesome chapter!


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its time to get the old Ryan back.
and man is that ironic =P
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PostSubject: Re: My Fan Fic - The Rising prodigy (chapter 30 now up)   Sun Oct 18, 2009 6:56 pm

awesome ^^ he got owned in like 5 seconds lol


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PostSubject: Re: My Fan Fic - The Rising prodigy (chapter 30 now up)   Sun Oct 18, 2009 6:58 pm

Jaden, no one word posts, why is it awesome? Please edit your post or it will be deleted.
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PostSubject: Re: My Fan Fic - The Rising prodigy (chapter 30 now up)   Sun Oct 18, 2009 7:28 pm

Phoenix Enforcer wrote:
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
*endless clapping*

definitely worth the wait awesome chapter!


Sarah wrote:
its time to get the old Ryan back.
and man is that ironic =P


lol im glad they're worth the wait. thats what i was hoping lol i plan to keep them good cause i dont want any disapointment. and when you say thats ironic, do you mean its cause i came back to forums? lol im lost here Razz


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awesome ^^ he got owned in like 5 seconds lol

lmao he did didnt he.




im glad you all like it so far. its nice to see.
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PostSubject: Re: My Fan Fic - The Rising prodigy (chapter 30 now up)   Sun Oct 18, 2009 8:11 pm

Damn Lil Bro.. i still have high expectations for you man
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PostSubject: Re: My Fan Fic - The Rising prodigy (chapter 30 now up)   Sun Oct 18, 2009 8:39 pm

Ryan wrote:
and when you say thats ironic, do you mean its cause i came back to forums? lol im lost here

yeah...sorta

pretty much yeppers =P

ps: get on ham =D
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PostSubject: Re: My Fan Fic - The Rising prodigy (chapter 30 now up)   Wed Oct 28, 2009 8:38 pm

recently catching up with the chapter 30, and it's awesome

i'm waiting for 31
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